' Looking around frantically to see if some one saw what was happening, I was down fallen. Not a soul in sight. I walked sullenly in front of Bruce as we wind our way through the maze of projects till we reached his cousins apartment. It was on the third landing, with a concrete floor through out and a area rug in the living room. The kitchen was off to one side and down a short hall way was the bath and two bedrooms. I knew that Bruce's cousin was a violent drunk that had no compunction of busting a boy in the ass with his member, but I did not want Bruce to slap me again either. I glanced down the hall and could see that both doors to the bedrooms were open, it gave me assurance that no one was home. The last time I was there both doors were closed and Bruce's drunken cousin woke up out of a drunken stupor and found Bruce and I engaged in sexual intimacy. At first he thought I was a girl, but as soon as he saw I was a boy he wasted no time in sticking his old male member up my well. Vicky andTank were also always going to be together and there are some sectionswritten but not included that go into that (it just didn't fit into thetimeline well). Granny was tough to deal with and I'm the leastsatisfied how she behaved in the middle of the story and with her finalfate. Cindy/Artemis is the character that I screwed up the most withearly plot decisions. I think she came out OK, but I could have dealtwith her better. The Slow Reality aspect was going to be emphasizedmore, but I found that the story became awkward if I stuck to that plotdevice. So, though the 3 stages of changes were still there, I didn'tplay it up after the first few.I don't know that I'll ever write another story, but I would love to haveyour feedback about the overall story, plot, writing style, etc. if youwill offer it. I feel like my writing got better as I went, but knowthat it needs work. I am tempted to go back and clean up the firstseveral parts; would love to know if you think it.
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