On the other hand, the characters are wooden, some of the dialogue is stilted, and the plot is very predictable. It would be possible to spruce up the characters and fix the dialogue, but the plot, well, it would be hard to do much to it without a major rewrite. I'm normally far out of town so wouldn't be able to work with you personally, but I could give you some directions to go with a rewrite, maybe some samples of how things could be changed to make it a work you'd be much more proud of. However, it would mean missing the projected publication date." I think we've pretty well missed it already, whatever we do," Dick said. "And Dave, your working with her on a rewrite sounds like a good idea. However, Miss Hamilton, you say you're a lot happier with the book you're working on now. Are you done with it?" I'd guess I'm about two thirds of the way through," she said, a little more brightly. "I pretty well know where the plot is going, but it surprises me sometimes. I mean, I'm. The local papers were just the start of the free publicity that Marianna received. She was interviewed on a local TV station that was news orientated and covered the area around Santa Rosa. That got her another interview on a mainstream network station in San Francisco. In each case, the interviews were very positive as well as curious about her conversion from classical music to contemporary rock/pop. She had the same answer for each time she was asked why the change: “Rock and Pop music is more fun. I have more freedom and I can let go and change things once in a while. I’m not stuck to a rigid format. Like I said, it’s more fun.”As her visibility increased, so did her performance opportunities. With Jerry’s guidance and my two cents worth, she was very careful about which gigs to accept and which to decline. Whichever she decided, it was bringing in a considerable amount of new money. Clary introduced her to a tax and investment counselor that he trusted. He would make sure she.
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